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Jean Bart Carrier AU

Posted: August 23rd, 2020, 11:23 am
by The Hand Of Ray
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This is one of my first attempts at shipbucket, a hypothetical completion of the Jean Bart as a aircraft carrier instead of a battleship.
Using parts from the sheet as well as using elements from the Joffe class from Garlicdesign.
Advice and criticism is welcomed and asked for!

Re: Jean Bart Carrier AU

Posted: August 26th, 2020, 12:36 am
by Anagonia
Hey, welcome! You should just probably use the [ img ] [ /img ] tag function instead of URL and IMG together. The image looks cool, but it is kinda small!

Re: Jean Bart Carrier AU

Posted: August 26th, 2020, 12:37 am
by Charguizard
I think that your imagehost resized your image, checking it out you typed in the url of the album instead of the image's url which would've been https://i.ibb.co/PMYJW13/Jean-Bart-AU.png
Also a top view would help a lot to find out if there's good clearance for those side turrets.

Re: Jean Bart Carrier AU

Posted: August 26th, 2020, 11:10 pm
by The Hand Of Ray
I think I fixed it.
Thanks for the help guys!

Re: Jean Bart Carrier AU

Posted: August 31st, 2020, 12:03 am
by erik_t
I think this concept would greatly benefit from a top view study. That doesn't mean you need to actually draw the top view in full Shipbucket style, but I suspect it would reveal that the elements as currently drawn wouldn't fit within a reasonable beam.

For a personal or AU design, it's important to do some preliminary layout work before beginning the drawing to make sure that the concept makes sense.

I emphasize that this is much better than my first Shipbucket-style drawings.

Re: Jean Bart Carrier AU

Posted: February 19th, 2022, 8:46 am
by LEUT_East
That funnel is brilliant.