Canadian JSS ship

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didibii
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Canadian JSS ship

#1 Post by didibii »

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Well im finally done with this ship and thanks to acelanceloet for giveing me the pictures i needed.
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As you can see i messed up on where the brg operator is, any edvice how i can fix it or get it better?
The bottom of this ship is black but i had to make it red becoues i couldt draw it like that.
The ship's fences where side ways so i drew the fenece side ways so try looking carefully to understand.
So any comments about the ship and my mistakes?
Hey is the name i put right?
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Work-list:
1.Candian JSS concept (needs more work on it)
2.Mary celeste (All most done 40% completed)
4.German CV europa (dont know if i should do it)

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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#2 Post by Novice »

Was the ship already built?
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didibii
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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#3 Post by didibii »

It's not build yet its still a program.
So what do you think about it? Is it good? Any mistakes?
Last edited by didibii on August 13th, 2010, 5:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Work-list:
1.Candian JSS concept (needs more work on it)
2.Mary celeste (All most done 40% completed)
4.German CV europa (dont know if i should do it)

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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#4 Post by klagldsf »

Then it gets bumped to never-built for now.
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didibii
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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#5 Post by didibii »

ok so ill just post the same thing in never-build
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Work-list:
1.Candian JSS concept (needs more work on it)
2.Mary celeste (All most done 40% completed)
4.German CV europa (dont know if i should do it)

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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#6 Post by klagldsf »

No you PM Colo a request to move the topic <_<
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didibii
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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#7 Post by didibii »

Ok i did, anyway do i have any mistakes?
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Work-list:
1.Candian JSS concept (needs more work on it)
2.Mary celeste (All most done 40% completed)
4.German CV europa (dont know if i should do it)

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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#8 Post by Gollevainen »

any mistakes?
weren't you supposed to ask: "have I done anything rigth?" to wich the answer sadly is "hardly"

Perhaps taking some other established shipbucket drawings under closer look and see how they are done and how not.

Also, Ougtha be doing that rigth away or else I have to consider wheter your presense here is just spamming
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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#9 Post by acelanceloet »

well it looks ok, but definitely not finished. there are some parts you haven't drawn yet (you can see the original drawing through it) also, this is only the beginning of drawing. you have to refine it (and please redo the bridge, look to the dutch jss for example how this should be done) I know, from the 3d model it looks finished, but now you have to details it, as you think it should be done. for example the flags, liferafts and doors. to do that, you have to do a lot of research..... but you will have to do that for every ship. if you do that, I think most guys on sb would be glad to help if needed ;)
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Mitchell van Os
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Re: Canadian JSS ship

#10 Post by Mitchell van Os »

The first ship is in build. Expected tobe in service with the dutch jss by 2014. And the second one year later. A 3rd in option . They will replace the replenish ships of todays canadian replenish ships.
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