REINO DE ESPAÑA

[eswube]

Why did you use a XXL Template

Probably because he considered it the coolest one.

[Portsmouth Bill]

I'm more concerned about what that 'thing' is , hanging off the stern

[Rhade]

Don't go there Bill, don't go there!

[Cruel2BEkind]

Feedback...
-You doubled up some of the lines on your armament
-And the front cannon has pixels missing from the bottom
-Railing doesn't go over the 2 missile launchers in the middle of the ship
-A radar dome on the top mast is still white
-It might be me but i doubt its not but... That maybe is a bad spot to put your propeller
-I agree with eswube... What is that on the stern?!?

[Raxar]

What is that on the stern?!?

Mk. 4 or Mk. 10 GMLS with part of the missile erased.
@alejandro This is probably the most feasible design you have done yet. I am not saying that it is perfect (and by all means it is not), but it would appear that you are starting to learn.
A few things:
~Your funnel is far to small. On a vessel this size, it should be about 2-2 1/2 times as big and there are usually 2 of them. It also is in a bad position. Right now it is sitting in the middle of the helicopter hanger, which defeats the purpose of having the hangar in the first place. Funnels don't just sit on the outside of the hull, they have ducts going straight down to the boilers. For an illustration of this, see here: viewtopic.php?f=15&t=3316&start=10.
~The azipod (propeller) is in a terrible position, and is facing the wrong way. Right now it is too exposed. If you have the hull curved at a lower angle, the you can put it at the start of the curve downwards. For an illustration, see here: http://www.shipbucket.com/images.php?di ... alin-1.png.
~Your ship completely lacks shading. Shading is used to show if something is round, flat, angled, etc. Below is a color palatte that Lazer_one made which is used my many bucketeers, with a few colors added that I frequently use. For a tutorial on shading, see here: http://www.shipbucket.com/standards.php
and here: http://www.shipbucket.com/forums/viewto ... f=5&t=3287

[alejandro]

[URL=http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/576/castillam.png/]

[Cruel2BEkind]

I hope this helps

[klagldsf]

I want to say something before anybody else...well too late.

But I want to say that the drawing has improved a lot. Really, all the basics are there now. You have a lot of funky hull stuff going on, but the basics are solid.

[alejandro]

[URL=http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/19/castillab.png/]

[klagldsf]

BTW that's not a funnel that's a VLS bay (directed at Cruel2BKind, obviously)