Shipbucket

anything else wrong before i post the revision

Definitely look at spacing out the superstructure and midships section, there's a large amount of deck open at the stern that is not going to use

i should have mentioned that space can be used for a catapult. I haven't drawn one yet and im working on equipment topdowns.
ps Should i move the rear guns back a little?

I know that you've decided to do top downs only, but when determining positions of guns, equipment, etc, side views will help greatly.

I'd just go with putting the catapult in the midsection, hence you can space out your weapons and machinery ensuring a cruiser like turn of speed

update


Im taking a break from ships to do topdowns of airplanes

i think i am better at planes

The planes are really nice, and the ship is for sure an improvement!

more paint schemes here
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/ ... 77c9dm.png
some are real, some are not

cvbbdd wrote:i think i am better at planes

Almost literally nothing is correct about your top-down views. It's like your sole contact of what these planes look like is based entirely on the existing shipbucket-scale side drawings and you just made a bunch of random guesses from there. The wingtips of the P-47 especially show this, as how someone else pointed that you did absolutely and obviously zero research on how the F4F's wings fold, both of which would've been corrected after doing a 5-second Google Image Search. And yet at the same time you figured out how the F6F's wings fold (same as the F4F) so you obviously know something.

Trojan wrote:The planes are really nice

Sorry to burst your bubble but...see above.