Axantha Yacht

[Samisunjp]

My second yacht drawing. This is the Axantha an explorer class yacht.(I know the font isn't correct I am still trying to figure it out) I don't know much about it,but here are the specs from superyachts.com Let me know what you think!

Overview
Name: Axantha
Previous Name: 22C
Type: Motor Yacht
Model: Custom
Sub Type: -
Builder: JFA Chantier Naval
Naval Architect: Vripack
Exterior Designers: Vripack
Interior Designer: N/A
Year: 2011
Flag: Portugal
MCA: Yes
Class: -
Hull NB:
Hull Colour: -
Dimensions
Length Overall: 43m (141' 1")
Length at Waterline: -
Beam: 8.75m (28' 9")
Draft (min): -
Draft (max): 2.50m (8' 2")
Gross Tonnage: -
Accommodations
Guests: 10 / 11
Cabins Total: 5
Cabins:
4 Double, 1 Twin, 1 Pullman,
Crew: 8

Construction
Hull Configuration: Displacement
Hull Material: Aluminium
Superstructure: Aluminium
Deck Material: -
Decks NB: -
Engine(s)
Quantity: 2
Fuel Type: Diesel
Manufacturer: Cummins Inc.
Model: QSK 19M
Power: 750hp
Total Power: 1500hp
Propulsion: Twin Screw
Performance & Capabilities
Max Speed: 14.80 kts
Cruising Speed: 12.50 kts
Range: 7,900 nm at 11.30 kts
Fuel Capacity: -
Water Capacity: -
Equipment
Generator:
2 x Onan 80 kW
Stabilizers: -
Thrusters: -
Amenities: -

And here is the drawing

[Erusia Force]

Nice work, things are looking good to me. Welcome to ship bucket

[acelanceloet]

you don't have any shading under the overhangs, and the detailing could be done a little more. other then that, it looks good to me.

[rickdog]

I think that your drawing is ok, it is very advanced to its final layout, but more work is required in trying to get some of those small little details right.

At the JFA yachts site, there is a perfect side view, although not in shipbucket style (part of your homework here), where you can see how they rendered the yacht. In it you can see for instance that the windows of the first deck in your drawing are too big, the same as with the portholes on the hull. The second level portholes of the hull at the front, in your drawing are too high, and the extension of the overhang of the second deck, to the back doesn`t get wider as in your drawing. At last between the second deck and the crew deck, there are some stairs, in which you need to work a bit more (in your drawing they end no where).
Sorry to be a pain in the ass sometimes (as probably I`m being right now), but you're rendering of the ship must be the best possible.
Here is the link :
http://www.jfa-yachts.com/EN/index.php/drawings-axantha

One last suggestion, (in which case I may be wrong, subject to a moderator "slap" in the butt, ), don`t try to finish so fast every ship you draw (speed will come in time, as you do more and more drawings, where you will acquire more expertice in drawing, in the style), try at first to get right the tips and suggestions others are giving to you.