interesting to see the british guns and dutch CIWS on the otherwise fully USN weapon and sensor suite. few comments remain, but it is getting near...
- the aft SPY-1 faces are partially blocked by the funnels. this is the reason for the tico's uncommon setup of the SPY-1 facets.
- the mast looks somewhat outdated. a quick glance learns that this is the mast of the Kidd class, which is an spruance mast on the bottom.... so at least part of your mast is from an 1970's design..... hmmm
- on top of the above, I am not certain on this, but shouldn't that mast require crediting?
- hull design looks good now
- the directors. you are going to want an 360 degrees cover from the SPG-62, so that means one at each side at least. the SPG 60 is good for gun guidance, so an additional one on the bow makes some sense.... but I'd rather have an setup with 3-4 SPG-62, as those can do gun AND missile guidance and by that will be far more effective. also, the large dome on the mast is an SPQ-9 IIRC, and is an gun director as well....
- I might be wrong, but I think I spot an missing corner somewhere next to the aft SPY-1 radar. right now your aft bridge is OR curved OR very wide.... and I mean VERY VERY wide.
-supposing you have 25person liferafts, you have now an maximum amount of 100 people on board. when having an helicrew and some evac or prisoner possibilities, that will leave you with an crew of about 60-70.... seeing that the dutch navy operates frigates with an crew of over 200, I would add some liferafts.... in addition to the fact that you'd better spread the liferafts, I suggest you do so on the hangar and near the RHIB.
- an question: why is the amidships VLS area raised an half deck?
- I do not recognise the rightmost missile.... what is it?
- considering this ship will have the displacement of about an spruance or an burke, I suggest an slightly bigger prop.
- I might be wrong, but IIRC that isn't the latest westland lynx. if it isn't, the newest one is on this drawing (don't know if it is anywhere else with top view and all, and no time to search for it)
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz22 ... lotv33.png
you should repaint it though, as it is in my AU colours there.
don't be fooled by the long list of comments: most are minor and can easily be fixed, we are getting near an working ship now.